Pros

• good variety of shots
• Good opening credits
• Establishment of location
• effective storyline
• Good understanding of thriller genre
• Nice sense of ambience through heavy breathing

Cons

• Not a rough cut
• Music needs to be tidied up and some bits need to be louder
• The sound needs ti be changed because the volume is bad in some parts of the footage - In the dark footage we need to make sure that its obvious there is music and have it louder to create a more tense atmosphere
• In the last shot of jaelle sitting down, we need to have the actual sound of the TV to show that this person is invading her homely environment.
• In the daytime shots it needs to edited to be made less brighter so it flows better with the darker shots previously
• need more titles to fit in the darker spaces of the footage
• We need to shorten the opening a little bit so it doesn't drag on

Filming - Thursday 3rd march

Jaelle+Katie

Today me and jaelle were filming in the grand arcade. I filmed jaelle walking into the entrance of the shopping centre and going into shops ( Topshop.) Also when filming i filmed her talking a friend which was unplanned and was an advantage to us as it makes our footage more affective and real life. We see him walking off from the conversation which gives off to the audience that she was meeting up with a friend and gives an insight into what the character likes doing and shows her friend. Towards the end of the filming session i filmed jaelle walking out of the grand arcade and having other people walking past it looks more suspicous and creates a risky atmosphere.

Vision Productions

Pixar Animation Logo

Pixar's production logo is used mainly for children's films and therefore the use of animation makes it fit categorically and also links back to the fact that Pixar is in fact an animation co-oporation.

Preliminary Task