Pros

• good variety of shots
• Good opening credits
• Establishment of location
• effective storyline
• Good understanding of thriller genre
• Nice sense of ambience through heavy breathing

Cons

• Not a rough cut
• Music needs to be tidied up and some bits need to be louder
• The sound needs ti be changed because the volume is bad in some parts of the footage - In the dark footage we need to make sure that its obvious there is music and have it louder to create a more tense atmosphere
• In the last shot of jaelle sitting down, we need to have the actual sound of the TV to show that this person is invading her homely environment.
• In the daytime shots it needs to edited to be made less brighter so it flows better with the darker shots previously
• need more titles to fit in the darker spaces of the footage
• We need to shorten the opening a little bit so it doesn't drag on